THE
STICKY STORY
by Emily Jean Carroll
What
is a sticky story? A sticky story is the kind you want to
write. I can think of three kinds.
You
want your readers--beginning with the editor or publisher you
send the story to--to turn page after page of your short story,
chapter after chapter of your novel. You want it to be so
exciting, so moving, so engrossing, so well written that your
readers find it so sticky they can't put it down.
Writing a sticky story is easy. You begin with a terrific
hook, one that grabs the readers and holds their attention
through the first few pages. You introduce your
well-drawn, likable characters, you lay your plot, you place
your setting and you let your readers know they are in for a
great read.
You
work the middle of your story so expertly that the tale unfolds
as perfectly as an expensive paper fan. You include all
the elements. You present conflict, and put in stumbling
blocks for your characters to overcome. You build tension,
you show your characters grow and mature, and you include minor
characters and their problems as a bonus. You put in
surprises, twists and turns that startle, amaze and delight you
readers.
You
build your sticky story through to an exciting ending. You
tie up all the loose ends, stop writing when the story is told,
and leave your readers wanting more.
That
is the way one sticky story is written. It is a story so
sticky the reader can't put it down.
Another sticky story is one that presents characters of such
qualities, be they good or bad, that they are remembered for
years to come. They are vivid, full-bodied, endearing, or
so dastardly that they are never forgotten.
This
story has characters that stick in the minds of your readers.
We can picture characters
in sticky stories so well that we're often disappointed if a
movie is made of the story and the movie version character is
not the character we envisioned.
One
sticky character I remember is one E. Annie Proulx created
simply to give directions to her main characters in her book,
THE SHIPPING NEWS. Her description of this very minor
character was so complete and so vivid that I remember him
today. Proulx created a character that stuck.
When
you complete you own work, be it a short story or a novel length
manuscript, try to put yourself in your reader's place.
Would the story capture you and hold your attention to the end?
Would your characters seem real to you? Would they stick
in your mind as if they were actual people you have met and are
concerned about? Are they characters you would remember
for years?
Ask
yourself what you could do to strengthen your plot. Play
around with "what if" scenarios. What if my
character didn't get the call about the accident until later?
What if Susan didn't want to marry Mark? What if there was
a detour on their way that took them to . .? What if the
baby turned out to be twins? What if . . .
Build
your characters from birth on. Where did Susan grow up?
What did Mark think of his father? Why does Susan chew her
fingernails? Why can't Mark make a commitment?
Your
characters must have lived a complete life to be
three-dimensional. Know who your characters are so they
can be true to their background, to come to life in your story,
to live on after the book is closed.
Take
an old manuscript that didn't quite turn out right, one that you
gave up on, and try to make it a sticky story.
Oh.
The third kind of sticky story? You probably have no
trouble with that one. It's the one you worked on while
munching on that peanut butter sandwich . . . or was it that
jelly doughnut?
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Emily Jean Carroll has written numerous short stories, many of
which have been published in national magazines like Woman's
World. |